I tried to write Part 3 of Darcy's Chilling Proposal.
In this short story, I was going to make Mr. Bingley a scoundrel. But in the last minute, I tried to save him and put the blame on another person. But Mr. Bingley turned out to be a spineless puppet. I don't like what I've written. I'm undecided if I should go back to the original plan or continue with this.
Urgh! I want to smack Mr. Bingley's head and ask him to stand up and be a man.
What do you suggest?
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